There is a proficient understanding here on how your main product uses and develops forms and conventions of music videos. Good discussion on the use of micro-elements, MES and character representation which is supported well by relating your ideas back to influences of existing media products and relevant theory. Your music video choices is discussed to good detail. Proficient skill in the choice of form in which to present the evaluation question as it is detailed where required as well as illustrative too. Proficient ability to communicate too.
To improve; -Dyer and Goodwin do not just focus on the star appeal of women men too... -Where you discuss that you challenged Mulvey, it is good that you discuss this however there are no females in your video...
There is a proficient understanding here on how your main product uses and develops forms and conventions of music videos. Good discussion on the use of micro-elements, MES and character representation which is supported well by relating your ideas back to influences of existing media products and relevant theory. Your music video choices is discussed to good detail. Proficient skill in the choice of form in which to present the evaluation question as it is detailed where required as well as illustrative too. Proficient ability to communicate too.
ReplyDeleteTo improve;
-Dyer and Goodwin do not just focus on the star appeal of women men too...
-Where you discuss that you challenged Mulvey, it is good that you discuss this however there are no females in your video...