Purpose of an advert
- Appeal to the intended target audience.
- Buy into artist lifestyle and ideas.
- Feeds into the representation of the 'star image'.
- Attract, persuade and influence.
Draft 1:
advantages
- Artist image is clear
- Key information such as the date and singles that feature on album
- Colour theme compliments the 'House' Genre'
disadvantages
- Text is not clear as it gets lost within the image
- Colour of text is too similar to other colours in the advert
- doesnt state where it can be downloaded from
- layout needs to be clearer
- better image of artist
Draft 2:
advantages
- typographyu was more relevant to genre and clearer
- layout is much better and works well in revealling the text
- image of artist has better star appeal
disadvantage
- still need to show where it is available to download
- a lot of space on the right needs to be used#


Good to see the drafting process that you have gone through and that your work has been critically analysed for next steps.
ReplyDeleteTo improve;
-state at the end what you will now do for your final product to ensure that you are following all the right conventions